Video JE ili video JU JE ?

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Post by Indrik » 27 Nov 2017, 18:32

Drakus wrote:
27 Nov 2017, 18:16
"Došao je do šume gdje je obitavala. Ugledao je kako sedi na panju."
Sve je to fino i sjajno, i eto, gramatički, pravopisno i na sve ostale načine pravilno, ali meni to očajno zvuči i ja na potpuno nesvjesnom (a možda i svjesnom) nivou odmah znam da je ovo pisac mogao mnogo bolje da napiše.
Drakus wrote:
27 Nov 2017, 18:16
Došao je do šume gdje je obitavala. Ugledao ju je kako sedi na panju.
Ovo, naravno, da ne bi bilo zabune, zvuči još sto puta gore.
Hey hey, you wanna play
'Cos baby I can go and go
And every other day you're running off with so and so
Well, baby I would throw you if I didn't know you but I'm paying for it

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Post by ratiger » 27 Nov 2017, 19:49

E izeš ga, pričao sa nastavnicom srpskog, kaže stvarno pravilno i bez ,,ju''. Izvinjavam se zbog pametovanja.

Opet mi zvuči kao da nešto fali. ne možeš ko čovek više ni u prošlom vremenu pripovedati.
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Post by Indrik » 27 Nov 2017, 19:59

ratiger wrote:
27 Nov 2017, 19:49
pričao sa nastavnicom srpskog
Pa zar Drakusu ne vjeruješ? :P
Hey hey, you wanna play
'Cos baby I can go and go
And every other day you're running off with so and so
Well, baby I would throw you if I didn't know you but I'm paying for it

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Post by ratiger » 27 Nov 2017, 20:14

Drakus uopšte ne liči na nastavnicu, let alone srpskog.
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Post by Drakus » 27 Nov 2017, 20:44

Nemoj si takav. Imam dugu loknastu kosu. :D
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Through Strength I gain Power.
Through Power I gain Victory.
Through Victory my chains are Broken.
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Post by ratiger » 27 Nov 2017, 20:46

Drakus wrote:
27 Nov 2017, 20:44
Nemoj si takav. Imam dugu loknastu kosu. :D
:D :D :D
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